The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/12
Oh, I like this!

I got a big confused when you mentioned the wrestling team and a scholarship.... Did he get a second one he didn't apply for, or where you referring to that first one again, when you said that God applied for him? This really didn't detract from the entry as a whole, though.

Nice job. I'm glad the son learned some things. :)
This is a sweet story. I understand you wanted to explain about the divorce class because it led you to the Bible verse but that was a bigger part of your story. Maybe instead you could have gone into more details of the son and his struggles. I wanted to know more about him. The ending was really strong for me and left me with a warm feeling.
02/12/12
Thank you for sharing your story and the pain involved. I read your 'heart' and found praise for the way God ministered to your faith and your son's needs...
02/12/12
Great job with this. I appreciated your getting up early (4 am) to have alone time with God and His word.
I got chills at the end about your son and his scholarship! Praise the Lord.

I loved this.

God Bless~
What an amazing story of God's faithfulness. I felt the MC's pain going through a divorce and the struggles that followed. A well written story and one I enjoyed greatly. Thank you for sharing and God bless.
02/16/12
Congratulations! God Bless~