The Official Writing Challenge
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You are right, so much of life can feel like a raging storm. But, Jesus is our Captain and we will never be destroyed. Thanks for the great reminder.
This is really powerful and descriptive. I enjoyed the sea/boat analogy.

Though I liked them and thought they were quite creative, the opening paragraph may have gone a tad overboard for my tastes.

Later on, when you spoke more directly, I felt a greater connection. The prayer is awesome! (you may want to put prayer in italics to set it apart. Just put a at the start and a at the end).

But this is a beautiful, almost poetic piece of writing.
02/12/12
Very descriptive story, drawing the reader in. I think maybe some more punctuation is needed and a few sentences could be shortened. I found the overall content was very good.
Loved the title and the story was a powerful one. Life is like the sea. Trials and Tribulations, but we have a God who has overcome the world. Good job. Thanks for sharing and God bless.
02/12/12
Nicely done. I enjoyed this piece. God Bless~