The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/12
There are some great reminders in here.

Try to use exclamation points very rarely... They start to lose their impact if you use them too much. Typically, they should be used in dialogue or other quotes, and even then they should be used sparingly.

Nice job with this. Keep writing.
You make some really interesting facts. Be careful about generalizing because not all Teachers of God's word believe that the Bible isn't meant to be taken literally. You also jumped around a bit which makes it hard to follow. Take one idea like the wind and expand on that. I can tell you are passionate about your beliefs and really want to spread God's word and love.
I agree. Life truly is a wonder. I'm with you on the wind. From whence does it come. I enjoyed this so much. Thank you for sharing.