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02/03/12
A all too familiar lament of many people today. This was a lovely poem- and flowed smoothly. Thank you for this truthful and well written piece. God Bless you
02/03/12
An all too familiar lament of many people today. This was a lovely poem- and flowed smoothly. Thank you for this truthful and well written piece.

God Bless you~
This is a powerful lament with a hint of hope at the end.
02/08/12
I am in the same situation with job search. Our job is to find a job and it is tedious, but we do not give up hope. Thank you for that shining reminder! I pray you are abundantly blessed soon with an end to your search.
02/08/12
I agree about the greed of the powerful. Beautiful work. I was there at one time, did you see me walking?
I think many of you reader will see themselves in your piece. Nicely done.