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02/03/12
This was wonderful and beautifully written. Nice message and great entry.
God Bless~
02/03/12
I truly love this article, and how true. Certainly, those who think themselves first, shall be in-fact last. God's Kingdom is for the "little ons". God Bless!
I like this. Especially in today's economy I could appreciate all of the hidden messages from this love poem. Many wonder how they managed to be the lucky one to get the hob. I also saw it as a love poem to God, coming to us, loving us and providing for us. For me the scripture didn't seem to exactly fit the poem but I'm sure it will bring goosebumps to someone's arms. The Spirit does tend to do things like that.
02/08/12
Good job in capturing the last is first in God's kingdom.
I always appreciate the entries that are poems. Employment/unemployment can give us a false sense of our identity. Great reminder that "He came" for us.
02/10/12
You said a lot in just a few words here. Great message for all those who feel "less than" in today's world. Congrats on your win with this poem.
02/10/12
Congrats on your win!
God Bless~