The Official Writing Challenge
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02/03/12
This was on topic and brought forth a myriad of emotions, culminating into a powerful conclusion. Nice job. God Bless you~
02/03/12
A great eye-opener for those who wallow in self-pity. God is great, God is good, He is wonderful, and you did a great job of expressing the peace one can find in Him.
This is a powerful piece. I need to be reminded that my job wasn't who I was but what I did. It is easy for me to get down on myself at times.

My only suggestion might be to use a different tense every now and then (normally, I would never suggest that) but you were talking about the past using the present tense and it confused me a bit. You do want to be consistent with the tense but it's okay to take the reader into the past or look toward tomorrow with you.

This is a great devotion. The emotions are so raw and real.