The Official Writing Challenge
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10/26/05
Work on meter and sysmbolism, and you have a great poem - this appears to be a poem in progress. Thank you for posting.
10/27/05
I like this a lot. The rhyme-less-ness (is that a word?) contributes to the mood of the poem, which has very well-chosen words. Well done!