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01/26/12
Well-written argument showing some of the ways we destroy our harmony with our Creator
01/26/12
Great job with this piece. Topic was spot on, and the message enthralling.
God Bless~
01/27/12
Freewill is a gift, intended to give man the opportunity to worship and honor his God. Man can make freewill a curse by using it to turn away from his creator, creating for himself chaos and not peace! You presented this quite well.
01/27/12
Beautiful imagery in showing agreement with God's plan through nature and the discord we add when free-will is out of harmony with His will for us. Good job!
02/01/12
A wonderful job of pointing out the error of man, and the obedience of the creation that God made. What a shame to mankind. We hate the chaos, but the only way we can change it is to brighten the corner where we are. A sad account of humanity. Great job of expressing this.
I enjoyed this colorful and descriptive analogy. I think it was spot on topic and in a fresh creative way. I noticed near the end you used the words agreement and disagreement (there's nothing wrong with that). I've done that too especially if I'm afraid people are going to think it is off topic. I just wanted to reassure you that you didn't need to do that. The comparison of what humans do and what God intended was a brilliant way to showcase this topic.
02/02/12
Congrats on your HR.
God Bless~