The Official Writing Challenge
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Several sentences could use one or two commas so they aren't so long, but other than that it was a good story. Keep up the good work.
10/26/05
All He requires is that we give it our best effort with every fiber of our mind, heart, and soul. Where we fall short, He will pick up the slack! Thanks for sharing your heartfelt article!