The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/12
Wow, what a bad experience, but also a good lesson for those of us who may find ourselves in such a cirvumstance. Great job of expressing it.
01/19/12
This was some story. Wow.
But, a powerful lesson to be shared...A very good job that brought meaning to the topic, and emotions to the core.

God Bless you~
This story brought up feelings that I had on a youth trip and that is exactly what a story is supposed to do. When we returned home I thanked God that I never had a girl even though I had begged him for one. God does have a sense of humor because I gave birth to a little girl the next spring. My oldest son was 26 at the time. Good writing.
01/22/12
I felt your emotions from the beginning to the end of this story. Nicely done.
01/22/12
How hurtful that must have been...and it seemed as if the girls had the driver leave you on purpose, at least that is how is seemed to me when I read it…and that could have caused bitterness...instead, you took your mind off those girls’ unkindness and put it on God and His love and the vision of you doing that is so beautiful! I loved this story, was one of my favorite reads! Thanks for sharing! Well done!
01/26/12
Congrats! God bless~