The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/12
This was a powerful story- with a lot of emotions and anguish throughout.

The ending was strong, and the scripture chosen, was perfect.

Good job. God Bless~
01/22/12
Wonderful content. Great scripture application. Enjoyed.
01/23/12
Great poem...a reminder that no matter how much we doctor the outward, God sees the inward, and there is no way to camouflage what we truly are from Him. Nicely done, enjoyed the read.
01/23/12
A good example of what happens when we are living the life outwardly, but we know it's fake. Jesus does what is necessary to reach us. If we will listen.
01/26/12
congratulations on your first place win! God Bless~