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01/19/12
Oh, how this poem speaks to many in the struggles of life. Sometimes we go through a lot more trials when we do not learn to lean on the Solver of our problems. Good job.
01/19/12
This will touch everyone who reads this. Fabulous job.

I thought this was simply beautiful; the entire message, and the poem. Powerful and will remain with me long after I close down my computer.

Good job. God Bless~
01/22/12
Well done. Haven't we all felt like an embarrassment to the Lord. But,He is always faithful to forgive.
Thanks for sharing.
01/22/12
Well done. Haven't we all felt like an embarrassment to the Lord. But,He is always faithful to forgive.
Thanks for sharing.
01/22/12
01/23/12
Having the eyes to see and the sense to be embarrassed and ashamed before Him, is the beginning of wisdom. Great poem!
01/23/12
The journey from shame before the Lord to knowing his unconditional love is worth it all - and you expressed it well.