The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/12
Wonderful poem and covers the subject well. I enjoy your rhyme. It flowed so well.
01/19/12
One word - "Beautiful!"

I loved this - great job.

God Bless~
Good job. I like the picture of Jesus with his rod and staff, we are his lambs.
01/20/12
"if you only be yourself" says a lot. With God, we don't need to pretend or put on a show. He knows us too well for that. Good job.
01/22/12
Very nice poem of truthÖGod created us, so we should never be ashamed of who we areÖall we should ever be ashamed of is not appreciating God. Good job on this!
01/22/12
Nicely done, good flow and a wonderful message.