The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/12
Very well done. This kept me in suspense, wondering where the embarrassment was going to enter the picture.
01/19/12
Beautiful job of keeping the reader in suspense, wondering. Nicely written, and the ending said it all. Good job! God Bless~
01/19/12
Small town living at its best. Nice story, and the ending is just right.
01/21/12
Ahh, embarrassment left to the very end. I was wondering when you'd bring it in. Nice job.
This was a very good read with very good descriptions.
01/22/12
Great story, very believable...and as the toilet flushed you could imagine Pastor Larry’s face flushing as well! Enjoyed this read!
01/22/12
You pulled me in to the story and kept me all the way to the flush. I never saw it coming. Good job.
This is a cute story. My son is planning on becoming a minister and funerals really scare him. Nice job of setting up the story. Congratulations for ranking 7th in level two!