The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/12
The most important and precious line to me in this story was the "last part."

God send His only begotten Son for us - and whoever shall believe in Him will have eternal life...Amen.

Interesting read, nice writing - Thank you!
God Bless~
Commitment is a two-way street.

Good writing.
01/16/12
A well written reminder of the spiritual committment that we need to pray we can keep with the Lord!
01/18/12
This story illustrates in a nutshell the plight of man and plan of God ! Good job!