The Official Writing Challenge
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I struggle to get the point on this writing as it seems too wordy.
01/16/12
Sincere heartfelt thoughts. Christ said wide is the road to destruction and many find it, narrow is the road to life and few people find it. The world has turned many into modern day Sadducees and Pharisees. Stay the course even Elijah lost His faith thinking he was the only one to serve God out of thousands but the Lord told him he had another few hundred in a nearby cave. Stay the course and use your gift to light the fires in the spirits of many and even if you don't see the results here, remember "one plants, one waters, and another reaps"...and God's eyes sees it all! Nice writing!
01/18/12
It is easy to see that you have written something that you are passionate about, and that come through. I do have a suggestion for you though. Go back and read this article very slowly out loud. Doing so is one of the best ways of discovering errors you might have made.
Keep writing and keep learning!