The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
Such a sad story with a tragic ending.

Moral of this story, as I perceive it, relates to Ephesians 4:29

Do not let any unwholesome talk come out of your mouths, but only what is helpful for building others up according to their needs, that it may benefit those who listen
01/13/12
Wow! Powerful story and well written. Good job and good luck!
01/13/12
Wow, such a great job of writing in such a way to wake people up to the results of their words!
01/13/12
Wow- this was powerful, and so sad at once. It should serve as a reminder for all of us.

A friend of mine died 9 years ago - and this is almost a verbatim of what happened to him, car crash, died upon impact. The wife called me crying - and her whole life was changed, all she could remember was her harsh words to him as he stormed out the door. Sad.

Good story, because not all stories have a "happy ending." But with Christ in our lives - we can get through ANYTHING.

God Bless~
I could feel the emotions and visualize the scene.

Good writing!
01/16/12
Very sad story and ending but with a very true message. I really enjoyed it!
01/19/12
Congrats on your ribbon!
Nice job. God Bless~
01/19/12
Oh wow, what an emotional story! Great job! Congratulations a well deserved win!