The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
I kept reading hoping this was going to lead to Christ, which it does. Thanks.

Check your punctuation.
01/13/12
Enjoyed this!
01/13/12
Loved it!
01/13/12
Nice job - this was very good. Clever line "handcuff my heart"

This created all kinds of images and thoughts, and at the end a great message.

Thanks - I liked it!
God Bless~
01/13/12
"Handcuffed my heart" really painted a picture for me also. Good job.
01/13/12
This was good. It could have used some punctuation so I could stop and take a natural breath.