The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/12
Recovery begins only after hitting rock bottom. You did a nice job getting into the head of your character. Realistic wording, no matter the drug of choice.
01/13/12
We have all traveled down dark paths in our lives and yes we have taken the Lord right along with us. I love the way you played this out in your story. We tend to forget he is with us EVERY step of the way. I think we would probably make far fewer bad choices if we would remember this. Good job!
01/13/12
Wow- this was a good story packed with powerful emotions, and a strong message.

Nicely done - great job with creating the MC's anguish and torment - Only one can take that "away from us" - and I was happy to see the character reach out and realize that.

I loved this...Great job.

God Bless~
I love it that you had the MC near a vacuum. It compares the dirtiest place in your home to the dirty psrts of our lives.

Excellent play with the metaphor!!

Good writting!!!
01/16/12
Nice lesson shared in this story, in the flesh many times we will fail, But Christ who endured everything understands and will forgive us seven times seven! Very Nice Story!
01/19/12
Congrats on your HR placement. God Bless~