The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely poem you have here. It is so true and if everyone who needs to make some amends would repent, God would be much happier.

Great work.
01/12/12
I enjoyed reading your poem. Clever use of words.
01/12/12
I liked the poem. It has good Rhyme and a clever use of words.

It also speaks to me of how faithful God is (compared to us)
01/13/12
Beautiful words! One little typo...In the second stanza, last line...Believe it should read "Not" instead of "No". Otherwise, very lovely.
01/13/12
Loved your poem. It had a cutting edge and good rhyme.
Beautiful Christian commitment.
01/13/12
This was a beautiful poem, it touched my heart. Nicely done, and just reall well written. Good job- thanks.
God Bless~
01/13/12
I think this poem says it all. Great job!
01/15/12
Your poem reminds us of the need to be Christians not in word only. I like the metaphor of rain as God's tears.

Just one observation: In my opinion, The last line of the last stanza flows better if you left out "That is".

Loved the message!
01/16/12
Very nicely done in a vibrant way that will cause the reader to think about their own lives!
I really liked this. It grabbed my heart and it speaks volumes.
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level 2!