The Official Writing Challenge
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12/29/11
This was short and right to the point. I liked it! Nicely done. God bless~
12/29/11
Good job!~
12/30/11
Cute!

I had a few issues with flow. Some of the lines seemed a bit long and others seems a bit short for the overall rhythm of the poem.

Nice job. There are definitely a couple of "chuckle worthy" lines in there. :)
This is a wonderful take on the topic and made me smile.
I laughed at this one. I hope you didn't really go through this, though!
Some of the rhymes feel forced. Next time you may want to try to be more creative with your rhymes, or use a less restrictive rhyming scheme.
Great job! I enjoyed this!
01/05/12
Congratulations on your 3rd place finish!
01/05/12
Congratulations. Nicely done. God Bless~