The Official Writing Challenge
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12/29/11
Nicely done - creative way of presenting the topic. I enjoyed it - flowed nicely.
God Bless~
12/30/11
Oh, I like this. I love the parallels from the beginning to the end.

It seems like this could be the basis for a longer work.... It felt just a bit short to me.

Nice job with this one.
12/31/11
God does change us, doesn't He. You did a great job of showing the contrast of a life that becomes a tool in the Lord's hands, literally. Good job!
I liked this. Right on topic and right to the point. Nicely done.
01/03/12
A very thought provoking piece. It shows how something can be used for both good and bad, all it takes is for the tools to be in the hand of a craftsman. Well done.
01/05/12
Congratulations on your 2nd place finish!
01/05/12
Congratulations on our second place win. Good job!
01/05/12
Congratulations on your second place win. Nice job. God Bless~
01/05/12
The sad thing about this poem is that there's a multitude of lost loners in our world creating havoc, dying for the lack of a godly friend who would point them to Jesus. We need to be that friend! Good job!