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12/15/11
A very nice piece! I wasn't sure in the early section where you commnet "grown existentially" that you meant "grown exponentially" - but that is how it felt. Also, extra line breaks between paragraphs might help the reading of it flow better.

I enjoyed the images of your son being able to connect with his family while stationed overseas. I thank and honor him for his service to our country. God bless!
12/15/11
Beautiful story and again like the previous entry - loved the last line! God is amazing, always there never will leave us, never will forsake us.

I enjoyed this story. And, my prayers go out to your son and all of the military who serve our country...God bless them, and God bless you~
As a military wife, I so relate to the distance that Skype and Face Book can make up. Thank you for sharing. It is true that God will never un-friend us and I think it's so important to dwell on that daily.
This is a sweet message. Add a Bible verse and prayer and you'd have a delightful devotion.

Double space and make smaller paragraph to give the reader the needed white space.

You did a great job weaving the topic throughout your story.
Oh yeah I wanted to say thank you for the sacrifices you and your family make on my behalf.