The Official Writing Challenge
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This was simply clever beyond words. Nicely done, I really enjoyed this entire story. The temptation and the "carnal mind" of man.

Great job with the subject/topic!

God bless~
This is awesome. Another winner in my book.
This is a great take on the topic. You developed your conflict right away and had me eager to read. At first, I thought the messages should be capitalized but then I decided you were writing them that way because many IM like that. I did notice that you would capitalize some words.
You did a nice job with the ending and you did a nice job with the message.
Nice take on the topic. Creative and well written. :)
Congratulations on your first place win and on your EC!
Congratulations on a well deserved win - I loved this! Good job. God Bless~
Thorougloy enjoued the article. shows me the standard that I need to aim for. And it's a High one!