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Nicely done. Good message and a sweet story. God Bless~
Here is a truly uplifting story about a download. It gave me a warm feeling inside.
This is a sweet story. I have suffered with chronic pain for 23 years soI could really relate to your story.

I think the beginning would have been stronger ifyou had started with the paragraph about the strange download. Then you could have included some of the background information.

You did a nice job of bringing the topic into your story. I liked the ending when the husband confirmed he needed his wife to support him and pray with him.

Your message that prayer is important is spot on. I have heard people say things like "The least I can do is pray." In reality praying is the MOST powerful thing we can do.
Such a moving and inspiring story.

I really like the way the Lord got Jenny's attention. The only helpful thing that struck me was in the conversation Jenny was reading from Jesus. It seemed that every few words He would say "Jenny." But since it was for her and sent to her, repeating her name over and over again felt a bit forced and unnatural.

I loved how this spoke to the impact as couples that we have on our spouses and the power we can lend when two actually become one - especially in prayer.

Very nice writing!