The Official Writing Challenge
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11/17/11
Wow- this was really good! I truly enjoyed it. Nicely done, and you stayed on topic in a clever way.

I especially loved this:

"I can be thankful for God’s protection, for the filter of his Holy Spirit to screen rubbish out of my life and to keep me clean and pure for his glory."

That was a perfect and powerful ending to this beautifully written story.

God Bless~
I enjoyed this testimonial. I like how God gently reminds us of the errors of our ways.
11/22/11
A lighthearted story infused with the power of God's Word--excellent combination. I especially enjoy the grace. Good job!