The Official Writing Challenge
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Separate your paragraphs with a space for ease of reading. A minor edit and this one will work well - a touching story.
Awww! Such a touching story with the perfect happy ending. :) Well-told.
Wow! Very emotional story! I was prepared for the sad ending and then was happy to read he was okay! Good writing! The only change I might consider would not to start so many sentences with Then. Otherwise, very nice read!Keep writing!:)
I'm so glad Jack was found alive! Great story:)
Well, this was a GREAT way to start the Challenge. Fabulous character development, a realistically portrayed scene, and a surprise happy ending. Great job!
I really enjoyed this story! (OK! so I like happy endings! Haha!) Really good job!
Nice story! Good ending. I enjoyed it!
A beautiful story (could use some spacing to make it easier to read). I'm torn between wanting the happy ending and the knowledge that her husband was in heaven waiting for them.