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11/17/11
I loved this entry! I thought it was clever how you inserted "spam" as an unwanted visitor.

"The Bible is our ultimate source of wisdom, a strong tool against any of Satanís fiery darts" This is so true and such a good message to bring forth in your entry.

Nicely done!

God Bless~
11/18/11
Concise and yet so packed full of wisdom! A very well written piece. Well done.
You did a nice job covering the topic while delivering a powerful message.
You really nailed it. I loved the whole piece but especially the paragraph where you mention 'pursuing happiness or gaining joy'.
You've written a timeless message. Thanks
11/26/11
I agree that this devotional is nicely done. It is well-written, speaks truth and covers the topic as well. Great job.
11/28/11
How well did your piece fit the topic?...You mentioned Spam at the beginning, but it was not your main theme.

How well crafted?...few rough edges in grammar and sentence structure.
Did it start well?... Yes, I loved the opening sentence!


A clear message or POV?...The point that Spam is a trap to be avoided, and how to do it, was clear.

Satisfying conclusion?...Yes. Perhaps more of a connection between the opening sentence would have made the conclusion more relative to the topic.

Overall, a inspiring devotional.
11/28/11
Oops! "an" inspiring devotional.