The Official Writing Challenge
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My initial thought with the first line was that a 10 year old would know what rain was. Then, as I continued to read it dawned on me what the story was about. I really enjoyed this, good job!
Very well-written, it just moved right along. Unique POV, too--thanks for writing this!
I thought the same thing. what child has never heard of rain.. great take you back to the Bible story..
What a unique idea! I loved the ending too. Good job.
Unique, very creative and a wonderful narrative - all of the elements are here. Bravo.
I loved this story! Great perspective on an old Bible story! Good flow-kept me reading!
Shannah, congratulations on your 2nd place win in the Level 2 awards. Well done. You also ranked 13th overall (that's out of 147 entries), so definitely deserve a big pat on the back. Love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)