The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a lovely praise poem and it really touched my heart. Jesus can definitely change lives.

The biggest weakness I see in your lovely piece is that you really missed the topic, I saw a bit of a search in it but no trace of an internet log.

You have a wonderful sense of rhythm and your words flow effortlessly. This is a beautiful and thought- provoking piece.
11/04/11
Nice poem...I enjoyed the read...a little off topic...God bless you in your writing...
11/06/11
A beautiful poem, and so true, Praise the Lord, our Savior.

I am thinking you "were showing an actual blog" without mentioning the subject. I think it was a good way of sharing a powerful message, while blogging and staying on topic.

Thank you. God Bless~
Beautiful poem, but I do not make a connection to blog.
Obviously very heart felt prose. Thanks for sharing.
11/13/11
This is a beautiful, heartfelt poem, but I too had a hard time finding the topic in it. I suppose it could be part of a blog, but if so you need to make that clear.