The Official Writing Challenge
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A pleasant reminder that fun can be innocent and free! You certainly capture wetness with your words.
10/24/05
A fun entry!! Makes me want to be that age again. You expressed their conversation well.
This was very cute and funny. I was reminded of the silly stunts I tried with my best friend at that age. Thanks for a fun story.
10/27/05
A cute fun story - splish splash. Writing hint: try using "beats" instead of so many "affirmations."