The Official Writing Challenge
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09/25/11
This is so positive and encouraging! I think I need to print this one out and stick it on my fridge to read every morning!

The first sentence is so bold and strong, "We shall not be defeated" - what a strong declaration to make, and to follow it up with the reason why - Jesus! - this is something I know I need to do every single day!

May I make one small suggestion? Try to proof-read really closely before submitting; there were only a couple of teeny errors that caused me to lose the flow a bit.

Thank you for writing this awesome war cry! And be encouraged that, whether you 'place' in the rankings or not, your words have made a difference to at least one person - me! - and for a writer, there can be no greater reward! Well done.
I agree with what Helen wrote. I am going to print this and put it on my bathroom mirror so I can read this every morning and reaffirm my faith in the ever present Savior who is just a breath away.
09/25/11
Yes I agree, very nice praise poem. I also agree with Helen on the bit of tweaking needed to correct errors and to possibly improve flow. But very nice read. God Bless.
This is a lovely and powerful poem.