The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/05
Your story is wonderful. I liked your title too! :D
10/25/05
Very nice! The mother's anxiety was palpable, and the little girls were realistically written. A few punctuation errors to clean up--but this is a well-written story with a good lesson.
A good story, and goes to show that we should not look on a person's exterior and assume they are a certain type of person. God can use anyone from little children to bikers in order to do His work. Good job.