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09/16/11
Sweet story with a good message. I liked the exchange between the mother and child. Nice Job! God Bless~
09/17/11
Such a sweet conversation with lots of little truths to be had. Very nicely done!
A wise mom. You did a good job on her character and on the dialog between the two.
A very sweet, well-written story. The dialogue seemed natural. Good job!
This is a sweet story. As humans it's really hard to picture angels and what they might be doing and thinking. This is a creative story that would help children understand at a level they could relate to.
09/20/11
I liked this story. I thought the dialogue worked well and relayed a strong message
09/20/11
Charming little angel story, good concept - would make a cute little Children’s book and could have sequels with Lucifer’s fall and the plan of salvation for human's explained to the little angel. Enjoyed!
09/20/11
I agree with the children's story idea, because there is so much new-age stuff about angels, and it would be a nice balance.
09/21/11
This is a sweet well written story. I love how you wrote the communication between the mom and child.
well done!
God bless