The Official Writing Challenge
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09/16/11
Nicely written with beautiful points throughout. God bless~
09/17/11
I enjoyed this very much! It would have been easier to read though had there been some spacing between the writings.
Well done!
God bless
Beautiful. It flowed so easily.
09/20/11
Very nice praise and testimonial poem. I agree with the suggestion that poem broken into stanzas would have been not only much easier to read, it allows the reader to linger more on one thought or scene before moving along to the next. But this blessed my soul with its wonderful love message and I enjoyed the read!