The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
I liked your comparison. I am sitting here in a hurricane thinking now of the other 'rainy' periods of my life. I migt suggest that you leave off the last sentence as your conclusion was already well made.
10/25/05
This is a very thoughtful article on rain! I especially liked the example of the Sunday School and the farmer. I think maybe you could end it there, as the second half seems to make a different point, also with rain. Both halves are very good, they just seem like two devotionals put together. Also, instead of spelling out words to emphasize them, try italics instead; they're easier on your readers. Thanks for digging into the Scriptures for some good insights for us!