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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Persuasion (not about the book) (09/01/11)

TITLE: Intangible Influence
By Shanta Richard


The shepherd huddled in his woolen cloak within the small opening in the sheepfold – a circular stone wall enclosure that guarded his sheep. The calm coolness of predawn whispered to him that soon it would be daybreak. His alert ears sensed the sheep moving as they slowly woke up. The eastern sky brightened as the sun started his daily rounds. The shepherd rubbed the sleep from his eyes, shook the dust from his cloak, threw it around his shoulders and got up. He held his rod across the opening allowing the sheep to move out one at a time, as he counted them. He whistled sharply to arouse the lazy ones. When all of them were out he closed the opening with a thorn bush and led his flock to the pastures to graze.

When the sun climbed up high in the sky and the sheep were hot and thirsty he guided them with his staff to the still, cool waters of a pool under the trees. There they rested, walked around or grazed randomly until it was time to go home for the night. All the while the shepherd watched them because sheep were very timid animals and would panic at the smallest provocation. They would not drink from a running stream. A harmless land snake rustling in the grass, a surprised baby rabbit or even the shadow of a vulture flying in the sky could scare them into a stampede. The shepherd had to calm them with his gentle persuasive words and soft music. He had to know them personally and they had to trust him.

Just as he is gentle the shepherd has to be strong and fearless to guard his sheep against the animal predators and human robbers. His was a lonely and dangerous life. Caring for his dumb and docile sheep, and controlling them with patience and calmness, is a stressful job. A horse can be controlled by a whip, an ox with a rod, an elephant with a prod and a dog with a shout. Try that with a flock of sheep and you will cause a pandemonium. As far as sheep are concerned, it is wise to follow Aesop’s advice, “Persuasion is more effective than force.”

While reading the Bible, I had wondered why God is compared to a shepherd and not to a fisherman or a farmer. Later I realized that a greater relationship exists between a shepherd and his sheep than that exists between the fisherman and his fish or the farmer and his crop. The shepherd has a persuasive touch as he softly nudges, gently coaxes and intangibly influences his sheep.

The Bible calls Church leaders Shepherds. They have to practice the gentle art of persuasion to keep their congregation united and to encourage new believers. Often when people are threatened and fear is used to convert them they will remain only as long as they are scared and then one day they will leave. In other words if force is used to convert a person he will remain converted only as long as force is applied and once it is lifted he will drift away. St. Thomas Aquinas has said that:
“To convert somebody go and take his hand and guide him.”
Persuasion is love in action, an intangible influence, and the power of sound expressed in words and song. A person thus converted will remain faithful to the end because:
“Thaw with her gentle persuasion is more powerful than Thor with his hammer.
One melts and the other breaks to pieces.” (Henry D. Thoreau.)

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C D Swanson 09/09/11
Beatifully written, nice job. Love in a gentle breeze is persuasion at its finest. I liked this. God Bless~
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 09/13/11
This is a nice message and has so many truth in it. The quote at the end was a great fit.
Linda Goergen09/14/11
This is one of my favorite readings this week! A powerful message presented beautifully and vividly! Great job!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 09/15/11
Congratulations for ranking 7th in level 2!