The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
Nice writing! Good flow.
Good story, noticed a couple of spelling mistakes, but nothing too major. Good job.
10/24/05
Good job. Could use some polish in some of the sentence structure, but a nice take on the fearful perspectives.
10/25/05
You did a nice job re-telling this Bible story, with an emphasis on the captain of the boat. I'd change "lively hood" to "livelihood." Unique approach to the topic: thanks a lot!
"Be still and know that I am God." One of my favorite Scriptures. Your interpretation is good however, a few minutes of smoothing out your sentences can improve this article. Good job, thanks for reminding me of this Scripture.
As others have pointed out, needs a little bit of editing, but this didn't detract from the piece. I thought this was actually going to be about Jonah - you fooled me. LOL. Great to see that you're shining in this genre also. Well done.
10/28/05
Nice touch to a familiar story. Karen
10/29/05
Nicely done
I loved reading this take on the familiar story of Christ calming the sea! Very engaging story telling!
Great story!