The Official Writing Challenge
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09/09/11
Powerful message with the enemy wanting to keep people in bondage. Amen to Jesus in freeing all souls. Good job...God Bless~
09/14/11
This was excellent...and praise God "Holy Ghost Power" is greater than cocaine and able to break drug’s bondage! Great poem for this day and age when so many seem hell bent on using drugs!
This is such a great original way to show Persuasion. I never thought I'd enjoy a poem about cocaine so much.

You might want to space it differently to make it easier to read. Perhaps have four lines in a verse then double-space between verses.

This is a great message, one I wish many teens tempting to try drugs should be required to read this.