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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Persuasion (not about the book) (09/01/11)

TITLE: If I Had Never Met Jesus
By Hazel Robinson
09/05/11


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If I Had Never Met Jesus

If I had never met Jesus,
In this, my one lifetime.
My heart could not be filled
With peace and love;
Nor would all of my hopes be sublime.
If I had never met Jesus,
Wonder where would I be today?
Alone, uncared about, still searching -
All the time accepting come what may.
If I had never met Jesus,
Would I still be caught up in a twirl -
Like the conman in the circus
Who cries - Win!
Just give it a whirl!
I could never have known
The Lord as my Shepherd;
Or understood His amazing grace?
Then thereís those moments and
Hours in prayer, I go to Him
Knowing Heís always there.
Iím so glad I did meet Jesus,
And the love I feel inside
Enables me to say,
It is well with my soul;
For in His love, I now abide


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CD Swanson 09/09/11
So beautiful! I loved this poem which speaks from your heart to our Lord of Lords, and King of Kings. It touched my heart, great job! God Bless~
marcella franseen 09/09/11
Beautiful poem.
Linda Goergen09/14/11
This beautiful poem was such a blessing to read as it provoked my own spirit to praise God for the many blessings knowing Him brings! Great job on this!
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 09/15/11
This is beautiful and really touched my heart.

You may want to check the message boards under writing challenge and see the criteria for judging. I think the reason this may not have done better is because it might have scored lower on the meets topic category.

I think the words are beautiful and could hear it as a song. The message will touch many hearts.