The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
I like taking different perspectives on issues. There are so many ways to look at rain and blessings!
I would have liked more separation between lines so the rhyming flowed a little better, but overall, nice piece. :)
I agree with the last comment (ie spacing). I really liked this, the descriptions and reminders of God throughout. A good piece. Thanks for sharing.
10/28/05
The words seem so poetic. I would consider converting this into a poem. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. Karen