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This is a great modern day Prodigal Daughter story. I admire your courage for sharing it. God can and will work miracles in our lives if we just open the door.

This needs a little polishing. There are some punctuation errors - comma mistakes, places where you need hyphens, and I'm not sure chicest is a word perhaps most chic'.

I'm only mentioning these little nitpicky mistakes because I think this is a beautiful testimony and one many people outside of FW need to read. This touched my heart in many ways and I believe your story could make a huge difference in someone's life. To know that by God's grace and your words someone might find her way home again is an incredible gift. I hope you do polish it up and have it edited. I believe this is great material for a magazine or newsletter. You've truly done an amazing job.
09/02/11
I agree with Shan. This is a wonderful prodigal daughter story. I love a great ending.

I think of the father in the story quite often and how he loved his son -- also how God loves us even when we act like a prodigal. That's true love.
09/03/11
Oh I really enjoyed this whole story. Great job, nicely done! God Bless you~