The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/05
I love a rainy day. :)
Nice thoughts and I liked the flow.
I noticed a couple spots where apostrophes weren't needed, and where "your" should have been "you're." But I enjoyed the message. Good writing - thanks for sharing.
10/25/05
Good job on consistency of rhyme and meter! Nice message in this poem. Be careful of apostrophe usage, and the commonly confused your / you're. Very sweet poem.
I like the last two lines (well, I like it all, but I really like those two lines) Exactly my sentiment! Perhaps, instead of calling it "Rain" you could call it "Alive". Thanks for sharing!
10/28/05
Nice poem. Jan, you were quick to catch the your/you're mistake. The rhyming pattern is consistent and not contrived. Best wishes with this piece. God bless. Karen