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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 2 – Intermediate)
Topic: Fruit (10/10/05)

TITLE: The Orange Peel
By Lisa Graham
10/17/05


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“I can’t wait for you to see the beautiful oranges growing on Methuselah this year,” my grandmother smiled as we walked through the grove.

“’Methuselah’ is a crazy name for an orange tree,” I declared.

“Methuselah was the first orange tree we planted,” she retorted. It has survived many storms, and hard freezes, not to mention major bug infestations, so, the name stands.”

“It was planted in 1963, the year I was born,” I said ruefully. “To me, the name ‘Methuselah’ means ancient.”

She shook her head. “Age is a silly thing to worry about. I’m proud of every single one of my eighty-four summers. I’ve survived cancer, open heart surgery, diabetes and various medical nuisances that would defeat most people my age. My faith in God keeps me going!”

I chuckled. “Remember last year when you went to the emergency room, and I was going through your purse, searching for ID?”

She pretended to ignore me.

“The only official-looking document in your wallet was a fishing license!”

“You guys may ultimately take my car keys and driver’s license, but I’ll never surrender my fishing license,” she vowed.

The sun was in its highest zenith, and cicadas stirred the humid air with their frenzied, insistent hum. Despite the heat, my grandmother was swathed head-to-toe in mismatched clothing, red sneakers, and a lime green hat. Maximum sun protection was the purpose behind this bizarre ensemble.

“How’s Kendall?” She knew that my husband and I were having problems.

“We don’t see each other much . . . we both work a lot of hours, and are rarely home at the same time.”

“Sounds like two ships passing in the night,” she remarked.

“It is what it is,” I said softly. “In the old days, we were poor and struggling, but during those years, we were a team . . . it was us against the world.”

“What changed things?” My grandmother never shies away from the tough questions.

“Now, we’re too busy to spend any time together. Even when we’re home at the same time, we’re typing frantically on the laptops, or reading reports, trying to keep up with the workload. There’s very little conversation, other than reminding each other to pick up the dry cleaning. Beyond that, there just doesn’t seem to be any purpose to the relationship. I’ve begun to think that we should just go our separate ways.”

“Here we are,” she interrupted as we walked up to the majestic old orange tree, known as “Methuselah.”

Inhaling the sweet fragrance of freshly turned earth and ripened oranges, I watched as she trained her expert eye on several limbs laden with fruit, before selecting one and gently plucking it from the tree. After my grandfather’s death, she started carrying his favorite pocket knife, which she used to deftly cut the orange peel into a tight, uninterrupted spiral to reveal the sweet, succulent treasure.

Handing me the spiral of orange peel, she asked,” What do you think should be done with this?”

“I guess it can be thrown away.” I shrugged. “Why keep it?”

“Don’t be so narrow-minded. The purpose of an orange peel is not limited to protecting the fruit from the sun and the elements. Once it’s removed from the orange, the peel can be used to make cattle feed or cosmetics. No part of an orange should go to waste.”

“What are you saying?”

“Everything has a purpose. Don’t be quick to judge something as useless . . . think twice before you throw it away. When I was sick, did you want to give up on me?”

“Of course, not! I’d never give up on you.”

She stroked Methuselah’s bark. “Like me, this old tree is scarred, but still standing, bearing fruit year after year. With careful nurturing and loving care, things will last longer. Relationships are like that, too.”

“So, you think I should try to work things out with Kendall? There are no guarantees our marriage can be salvaged.”

She smiled confidently. “One of my favorite verses is Leviticus 26:3 . . . ‘if you follow My decrees and are careful to obey My commands, I will send you rain in its season, and the ground will yield its crops and the trees of the field their fruit.’”

I promised to try.

A few months later, my husband, grandmother and I held a friendly competition to see who could catch the most fish. Guess who won?


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Daniel Owino Ogweno10/17/05
A good piece. This reminds me of our Lord Jesus Christ. Out of His immediate surrounding, he would pick an item which would end up teaching a very important lesson. It is the same thing for us: If we can allow our everyday conversations around the surrounding to teach us spiritual as well as social lessons, we would do better.
terri tiffany10/17/05
I loved this story! I could really see both of them talking and especially the grandmother's personality. She used her wisdom well and taught a good lesson. Great dialogue too especially your verbs.
Phyllis Inniss 10/17/05
Great story, great dialogue, great lesson. I like the way your grandmother used herself as an example to show despite her various health problems she was still very useful and wise.
Donnah Cole10/17/05
Excellent writing! I thoroughly enjoyed this...
c clemons10/17/05
Okay, no professionals are so suppose to be in the intermediate group. Who are you kidding? This was very, very good.
Sue Fulton-Lothrop10/19/05
Good dialogue is hard to write, but yours is smooth, realistic, and made me care about the characters. Thanks for sharing.
Garnet Miller 10/19/05
My husband and I became "two ships passing in the night" once our fortunes started to improve. God reminded us through hardships that we could flourish economically and intimately at the same time. I'm glad we didn't throw away our orange peel! Thanks for reminding me where God has brought me from:)
Jeffrey Snell10/20/05
Great job! Your colorful dialogue established the two characters' personalities and perspective very well. Good writing!
Janice Stotz10/20/05
I loved your article! It caught my attention and made me sit up straight at my computer desk. I got lost in the dialogue between the two characters! I agree that good dialogue is very hard to write. Keep writing and God bless!!!
Shelley Snyder10/21/05
I really enjoyed this story. I could picture the scene very well in my head with all those descriptions! Good job!!
Deborah Porter 10/24/05
Lisa, I just wanted to stop by and encourage you. You ranked 7th in the Level 2 awards, and 27th overall (out of 135 entries). Well done! With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)