The Official Writing Challenge
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09/01/11
Very good! I can relate to Shelly, so maybe I'm a little biased, but I liked this story very much!
I thoroughly enjoyed this. That sounds like so many young girls that when they see a handsome young man to them he is Mr. McDreamy. Her mother gave her wise counsel.
09/03/11
cute story with realistic comments throughout. God Bless~
This is a great story and has a nice little bit of humor sprinkled throughout. You did a great job of showing the reader a picture. Nice message too and a fresh take on the topic.
09/08/11
Really nice job. Congratulations...God Bless~
Congratulations on 1st!!! Good job!
09/08/11
This is a fun story, I really like it.