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08/25/11
A very good story of "living and conforming to the word" and God's doctrines.

Personally, I would never change any of God's words, no matter how slight. Other than that, I thought this was insightful, and full of promise to those reading it. NIce job. God bless you and yours~
AH! The joys of raising children. They come with no training manual. It's known as learn as you go, and in order to survive the growing years it is suggested you lean heavily on God's strength. An enjoyable read.
How true that motherhood is different than what most expect. I like the points you made, they made me stop and think which is always good,
08/28/11
Some great points and I liked how you opened with dialogue from a typical day, lol.

A suggestion: try breaking your paragraphs more. Long blocks of text in a short article can be intimidating to readers, and also harder to follow the sequence of the message.

Good devo!
08/29/11
Thanks for sharing your insightful piece - there's some good counselling advice in here. Thanks!
09/02/11
Congratulations Marcella on a well deserved win! Nice job...God Bless you~