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08/25/11
Good story with a happy ending for that lady bug.

And yes, "God did not create a spirit of fear..." If we all could keep that in mind and know He is with us always. God Bless~
08/26/11
I'm with Lucy when it comes to bedbugs. Good story with a happy ending. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for a story about fear. It can cripple us and blind us to facts. I loved how the story ended. Thank you for sharing a real phobia.
08/26/11
Great story, with lots of nice details. A few commas are missing in action.:-)You might consider using contractions to improve the flow of the story. For ex: "It's that bed bug." rather than, "It is that bed bug." Loved the devotional take-away at the end.