The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 245 times
Member Comments
Member
Date
08/25/11
Hahahahaha... I loved this line:"The model on the box was so pretty. I couldn’t wait to get home and transform myself into her. (Hair color reduces weight, age spots and wrinkles, right?" I am still hoping for that to transpire!

I loved this cute imaginative story you are lucky your hair didn't fall out! Nicely written, keep on writing...God Bless you~
I love this story! I, too, am glad your hair didn't fall out! Well written and right on topic. Good job!
I thoroughly enjoyed your hair color tragedy. Mine never is the color on the box which stopped me from doing it myself. Good job and keep writing.