The Official Writing Challenge
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10/18/05
This is a good illustation of how an intuitive Pastor recognizes what is wrong with his parishioners and and is willing to do something about it. May I point out though the following: 'whose fruit'. 'some of whom' and 'at a loss'. Thanks for sharing.
10/19/05
Good message! I might suggest dropping a few unnecessary words here and there and tightening up the sentences some.
Great article with a powerful punch. It reminded me of a book I read by Ted Haggard, "The Life Giving Church," an excellent read. Your pastor would love it.