The Official Writing Challenge
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THIS WAS HYSTERICAL.You had me laughing while at the same time feeling empathy for the poor guy. This is definitely a fun read.
08/14/11
Cute read, entertaining and delightfully amusing. I loved it. Nice job! God Bles you~
08/15/11
Delightlyfully sweet and creative. I will definitely remember it and isn't that truly why we write...?
A delightful story. I thought a ten year old buying flowers and chocolate, even being that interested in a girl, was a bit of a stretch. Even so, the ending was a perfect fit. Well done.
08/16/11
Ah, memories. I had my first beau was when I was 10. He gave me a box of chocolates from his dad's store (they tasted like cigars).

Your young man went the extra mile (or two) to be forgiven. Thanks for the memories.
08/18/11
Congrats on your well deserved win! God Bless~